An elevator pitch is a brief, persuasive speech that you use to spark interest in what your organization does. You can also use them to create interest in a project, idea, or product – or in yourself. A good elevator pitch should last no longer than a short elevator ride of 20 to 30 seconds, hence the name.
Things I should mention in an elevator pitch about my game are:
- title
- game story
- features
- what it makes it unique
- platforms
- availability
I’m Alex, I like computing and playing games. I’m learning how to create games and right now I’m working on this game I want to tell you about:
Far from Cosmic: The Brutal Assault it’s a surviving game. You play as an unknown creature who gets stuck on planet earth, which you are able to customize. People are not so nice, they try to catch you and make experiments to find out about other species like you. In this adventure, you learn how to survive and discover yourself and your powers. Your intentions are not to kill people, you need to find the way to get back home. The game features are: the level story, items, new powers and many other exciting things. It will be available on Steam soon.
I’ve asked my colleague Lucien to help me with my game idea by giving me feedback, so I can be able to improve it and make it better.
Lucien said: “Maybe you could say more about when it will be released and why you chose to release it on PC.”
After Lucien feedback’s I’ve improved my elevator pitch and now it looks like this:
I’m Alex, I like computing and playing games. I’m learning how to create games and right now I’m working on this game I want to tell you about:
Far from Cosmic: The Brutal Assault it’s a surviving game. You play as an unknown creature who gets stuck on planet earth, which you are able to customize. People are not so nice, they try to catch you and make experiments to find out about other species like you. In this adventure, you learn how to survive and discover yourself and your powers. Your intentions are not to kill people, you need to find the way to get back home. The game features are: the level story, items, new powers and many other exciting things. It will be available on Steam soon. Far from Cosmic: The Brutal Assault will be available on Steam in March 2018, also available on consoles very soon.
Sources:
The small world of a special gamer 